Tom has brown hair and he is 17 years old and he goes to college he sometime’s is always waking up early and he lives with his mother and father. Everyone knows him and every time he walks outside he says hi to everyone and then everyone says hi back to Tom.
The other charter is a girl she is 19 years old she has black hair and she has black eyes she has black cloths and black shoes black car it is mainly black everything her name is Riley
They were on a journey to find something that was very important to Riley
On the 13th of march On a sunny bright day Tom got up really early for no reason so then he go up and he tried to figure out what to do on a day with nothing going around no one was outside no on was on the park either then Tom got really scared but then he noticed that he woke up early then he started to chuckle then he waited outside and watched the sun come out and then all of the people came out of there house’s and they came out and said hi.
Later in the day Tom was just laying down on the grass he was bored then he finally thought of something he might have tried before but he doesn't know how to ride a helicopter so the idea that Tom thought of was flying on a helicopter then he found his dad’s old helicopter Tom said that the Helicopter was flown by his dad in 1990 and he was born in 1945 his dad was worried about son trying to fix and fly the plane but Tom’s mother wasn’t to worried about it then Tom got started on his dad’s helicopter.
It started to get dark and tom said he would work all night and so he did his mum and dad were starting to worry then Tom was so close to finishing and he said maybe I’ll finish the rest of it tomorrow and then Tom walked inside and locked the garage and he went to his room and fell asleep his mum and dad were relieved that they could finally go to sleep in peace knowing that there son is sleeping and he slept until the very next morning.
The very next morning Tom’s parent’s got up happily and went to the kitchen to eat there breakfast and Tom was still asleep from the long night he worked for then when he woke up he was more fast then normal and his eyes were so wide you can see them from a mile away and Tom’s parent’s asked him are you ok ? they said he said am I ok am I ok I am great Tom replied they were worried about what he was doing but they just kept an eye on him just to make sure he is ok.
Later that day Tom didn’t seem of at all it seemed that he was perfectly fine and he went to the garage and kept working on his helicopter and he was finally finished and he went upstairs to ask his dad and mum if he could take it for a ride and his mum said yes then his dad said yes too he was so happy he ran down the stairs very fast and went the kitchen and went to the garage and then he had to push the helicopter out of the garage so then that too half the day and then he finally got took off and then he said goodbye I’ll see you guys later but he forgot something that was very important and his parents were about to tell him but he already took off. He was flying into the air and then the blade of the helicopter hitted the power line and the power cutted of the street light and houses. I am so so sorry Tom shouted everyone said back to Tom it’s alright.
Tom was starting to get sleepy and then he woke up and found out that he forgot to put a nail on the helicopter then Tom went flying through the air and falling down in the middle of the grass I guess because Tom crashed landed in a grass and he was small and the grass was big then he noticed he was back home and he was in bed and he just noticed it was just a nightmare.
Hi Vika,
ReplyDeleteWhat an amazing effort for your writing today!! It can work really well to read your story out loud to yourself to check you have put full stops in the correct place. Looking forward to your next piece of work which you put up!
Miss West