Writing of the sinking boat

I was on the ship and I was at a party, and then all of a sudden boom
we all fell down from something and then some of us took a look outside,
and the boat was sinking so we all went outside and then we saw heaps
of people trying to get onto the lifeboats and then we went the boat had 2
hours to sink and 15 minutes to reach the bottom so then we all swam away.
When some of us went out the boat was already near the bottom so then some
people had to jump off so they did and then 705 people survived and 1,500 died.
it was all captain Smith’s fault the boat sunk.