Writing task, about WW1

One day some men and women got called out to war so then they packed their
things for war then they went, they were off to war there family wished them the
best of luck. When they were there by night it was a stormy night the tents were
already put out by the women and they were in charge of the nursing so when
people came in the nursing area they would already start working. When some
people saw the war they were so shocked they did it on and Island, and they we
re shocked they could see that they were surrounded by nothing they were
deserted, when they began war some of them were hurt some of them were
not and they kept fighting until it ended and then when they finished the war
they saw there was an amount of people dead and the amount that was alive
the dead was so much 7 million people died and some people survived it was
a tragic disaster if they never did war that would have never happened and now
it teaches everyone that we do not need to do war again or millions will die
again,