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Tuesday 21 September 2021

My Narrative story

 It was a casual day for all the people in the village, but there was only one problem that was going around the village. It was that the people were unhealthy, they didn’t like getting exercise, they didn’t like eating healthy, they just liked sitting there house watching tv,playing games and last but not least liked eating just junk food. But to this day a young man named Tane came for a trip back to his home village. All he could notice was that it was a total disaster. He knew that people weren’t eating healthy and doing any exercise so then he went to his family's village hoping they wouldn’t have done the same as what he had seen back in the other village. 


He had walked to his family’s village praying that they wouldn’t have done the same as what he saw back at the village. As he continued to walk he started to see a bit of the village he had to go to and that was his parent’s  village. He started to run faster and faster and he got closer to being there. A few minutes later he got there and he went to his parent’s house. 


After arriving at his parent’s house he was relieved knowing that they are living normally and just exercising, eating healthy, eating some Junk food and resting. He knew his family was alright but just in case he had asked “How have you guys been?” they all replied with “We are fine” they all talked about what’s been happening and everything. Tane thought maybe if he worked out and lived the life his family has lived or still living then they could teach other people to be healthy and live a proper life. 


A few hours later after exercising and eating healthy they got other people to eat healthy and exercise more. Tane and his family were so happy that they got some people to try and eat healthy and exercise. Tane and his family continued this program till this very day.


3 comments:

  1. I like your story! It makes me want to encourage the whole house to exercise and eat healthy! :)

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  2. Malo e lelei Vika, I like your story about healthy living. I like how Tane’s family are leading by example and encouraging others to be healthy too.

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  3. Hi Vika

    Well done for completing this writing task. You are very good at writing stories. I liked this story about Tane and his quest for a healthy lifestyle with his family. Keep up the great work.

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