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Friday 6 March 2020

Hanging on

Sally was so happy to see Jim, Sally hadn’t seen Jim in 10 years Jim was so happy to see his family too. Simon was thinking what they could do to celebrate Jim coming back from somewhere else but Simon also noticed that the stranger would wake up any time soon but Jim knows that the stranger doesn't know where Jim went to. But soOn the 26th of february the farther Simon and  the son Jim went to go get changed and they went at night time Jim was so excited to meet his mum who is at wellington so they got changed and went to walk to the train station and when they got to the train station Jim was looking at the train and simon was just looking and his phone then all of a sudden Jim grabbed on the door of the train and Jim's shoes came of and then the Father looked at the son and ran after them but then Simon stopped because he saw a cliff.


Simon  went back to the train station and saw a stranger who was looking at Jim he Simon was running as fast as he could but then the stranger vanished so fast Simon couldn’t tell who he or she was  he went back home and tried to figure who it was Simon went back to the train station and saw the same but different person.


Simon went up to this person he saw yesterday but it was just another stranger. He went back home and then he thought about this person. He texted Jim’s mum and then Simon told her that Simon was taken by a stranger when he was grabbing on the train. The mum had to wait until Simon found Jim.

10 years later the boy Jim was old enough to go find his parents but Jim didn't remember much because he was just 5 years old all he remembered was his dad’s name and what city they were in before Jim went missing. Jim had a phone so he researched the country he used to live in he spelled new york city and then he knew where to go but there was a problem the stranger was outside of Jim’s room so Jim quietly packed his stuff and went outside the window with his bag and quietly ran away from the house.

Jim ran to the airport to get on his flight. He stopped for a breath and then he paid for his flight and went to New York City. 2 hours later Jim finally arrived in New York city. He said it is beautiful in New York after that Jim went out of the airport and when he got out of the airport when Jim got outside he got out his phone and he typed Simon hopper because that was Jim’s last name and that was his father's last name so he typed it up on his phone and then it said where he lived Jim hopped up for joy. 


He waited for a taxi and then 10 minutes  later a taxi finally came so then Jim hopped into the taxi and then Jim told him where he wanted to go. Then the taxi went and then they stopped and he got out closing his eyes and he opened them and he saw a clean beautiful house. Then he looked and looked at the house and then he knocked on the door and waited for someone to open the door and Jim was smiling and standing straight. Jim  doesn't know what his father looked like he was ready to see what his father looked like but by the time that person opened the door the person looked at Jim said hello father suddenly the person on the door said I am not your father said in a gentle voice Jim was so embarrassed and sad Jim putted his hand in his pocket and felt something so he grabbed it out and it was a picture of his father he was so relieved he asked the person if he saw this man he said yes indeed and he said he lived in this house before we moved in and he said he lives in 5 mountain hill road so the the person on the door gave a peace of paper to Jim so he wouldn't forget he said thank you and waited for another taxi he waited and waited and then the taxi arrived and he went 5 mountain hill. 

Jim was waiting for the taxi to stop and then it finally stopped. Jim paid the taxi person and went to the house was just an ordinary house just like the other ones. He knocked on the door 2 times and smiled and he opened the door and it was his father. When Jim saw his father he was crying  with joy he was so relieved to see his father then Jim asked have you seen mum said Jim
Simon said is it really you, then Jim replied yes it is me they both said I missed you so then they went to wellington to go see Jim’s mum Sally.
metime soon the stranger didn’t come looking after all so then they had a party all night long and they stayed together so they won’t lose each other ever again. 




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